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Reviewer: xukaimin Signed Date: 11/09/17 12:59 am Title: Part 1: Catalyst

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Reviewer: Crazychick Anonymous Date: 11/24/06 02:58 pm Title: Part 4: Becoming Whole Again

Best fanfic i have ever read. Characterisation is excellent. The story explores McKay`s persona in extreme circumstances and keeps the reader engrossed in an adventure full of twists and turns. Only 2 critisisms. It looses pace a little in the middle and there`s an interlude been written in which i feel spoils the story. Fortunately the pace picks up for the finale and engages the reader once again. Highly recommended, a good read!

Author's Response:

The intermission had a whole back story that didn't really work for those that weren't reading in the moment.  I've now deleted it since you brought it to my attention that it was still there.  Thanks.

 I'm flattered to hear it is the best fanfic you have ever read.  What a compliment!!!

Reviewer: Leesa Perrie Anonymous Date: 08/08/06 04:29 pm Title: Part 1: Catalyst

Excellent story and very well written. What else can I say? I loved it.

Author's Response: Just saw this review!  Thanks so much.  Feedback is so much appreciated and I'm glad you liked it.

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